Hello Everyone,
Writing is often an unexpected self-revelatory experience, and my latest dilemma is a case in point. While Mike drafts the new moundbuilder book, PEOPLE OF THE MORNING STAR, I am drafting a novel about first contact between North American Native peoples and Norse explorers. Called WINE DARK LAND–after the Norse designation of North America as “Vinland,” or Wine Land–the story is set at around A.D. 1000. WINE DARK LAND is proving a fascinating experience to write because it’s a blend of three spiritual traditions: Norse beliefs in Thor and Freyda, early Christian beliefs, and Native American beliefs. Historical documentation for the beliefs of the “invaders” is well-documented, and we can extrapolate Native beliefs based upon the modern beliefs the Naskapi, Eskimo, and Montagnais. WINE DARK LAND is proving interesting to write for another reason. In this book, we’re taking another step into the fantastic and allowing the Spirit creatures to be real. Yeah, okay, for those of you who’ve read our books and been carried off by the Katchinas, eaten by Bird Man, attacked by Piasa, and had long in-depth conversations with the souls of lost warriors condemned to walk the earth forever…well, this may not sound new. But here’s the curious dilemma I’ve been having. We are all familiar with elves, trolls, and vampires…creatures from European mythology. They are all “humanlike.” It isn’t a stretch to see them as real. After all, they walk in front of our eyes on TV and in movies, as do angels, demons, and a variety of gods. Thor and Odin are good recent examples. (Wasn’t Anthony Hopkins great as Odin?)
Unfortunately–and I mean that profoundly–Americans are not accustomed to viewing Native Spirit creatures as real. It’s fine to show them in Dream scenes where the reader has an out…it’s just a dream. But how do I sustain “the willing suspension of disbelief” when it’s a non-human Spirit creature?
Let me place you inside the dilemma with examples from a variety of traditions. First, let’s talk about animal Spirit creatures. So…put on your author’s hat. Give your readers enough details about Shoshoni lifeways that they can look out through the eyes of the Shoshoni culture hero, Pachee Goyo. Now take the readers on a walk through the rocky hills and up to the edge of sacred Bull Lake in Wyoming’s Wind River Mountains. It’s midday, sunny, lots of reflections of aspen and pine trees in the calm green water…now look down into the lake. Do you see them? Do you see the buffalo who live under the water? They’re right there, an entire herd placidly looking up at you with sparkles of sunlight dancing in their brown eyes and from their horns. They’re as curious about you as you are about them. They’re very Powerful Spirit creatures. Pachee Goyo has to wait to hunt them until they come out of the lake and step onto dry land–into his world.
That wasn’t difficult, was it? Animal Spirit creatures are familiar enough that we “get” them. The author just has to–as Pachee Goyo teaches–allow them to come out of their magical world and into this world. Then they become “real” buffalo.
But what about Iroquoian Flying Heads? Put on your author’s hat again…your readers are seeing through the eyes of a young Seneca woman. Now take them on a walk through the dense maple and oak forests of New York. It a cold morning, just before dawn. Pink light enamels the sky and glistens in the dew that covers the grass. There’s a sudden thrashing to your left, branches flail wildly. It sounds like the entire forest is being torn apart. You spin around with wide eyes and see a severed head with long flowing hair streaming out behind it. It rushes you, reaching out to grab you with enormous bear paws…
Did you believe? Some of you did. But I suspect that many of you didn’t. Why not? If I’d been writing about a humanlike creature with big white wings stepping out of the forest, you might have felt awe, even reverence.
Culture is fascinating, isn’t it?
Here’s the self-revelatory element of this essay. Pachee Goyo’s lesson is something an author should not forget. Here’s what I mean. Put on your author’s hat again…I want you to change the point of view for your readers. They are no longer Pachee Goyo looking down at the water of sacred Bull Lake. Instead, they are walking in the body of a young European man, seeing through his eyes when he comes upon the lake by accident and suddenly looks down…
Now the European man is in ancient New York following a deer trail through the dappled shadows cast by the maples when the forest seems to be crashing down upon him. He spins around to see a hideous disembodied head rushing him, reaching out with bear paws…
Ah…there’s the awe we were missing.
Do you understand? It’s easier for your reader to “see” when he or she is looking out through the eyes of a European. Often, that is even true of Native Americans. Why is that? They’re the same Spirit creatures. It’s the same setting. Here’s the difference: Pachee Goyo’s lesson. You must bring those creatures out of their magical world and into this world. And what is this world? It’s a cultural framework. A way of “seeing.” Most American readers, regardless of their ethnic or racial origins, know the worldview of the European man. The reader stands easily in his Judeo-Christian boots, looks out through his eyes with no effort at all. The reader is “safe” interpreting what he sees through a lens, millenia old, where bizarre things go bump in the night, and they’re quite real. That cultural lens allows Native Spirit creatures to startle the reader–and come boldly to life–in a way they could not have otherwise.
Whether we believe or not–the Western religious frameworld is deeply ingrained in who we are as Americans. Or rather as descendants of Europeans, no matter where you may live.
Don’t be surprised then, if you’re reading WINE DARK LAND and first encounter Paleo-Eskimo Spirit creatures through the eyes of Europeans.
We want to bring them out of their magical world and allow you to stand face-to-face with them…in your world.
Kathy
19 thoughts on “Writing Spirit Characters…”
May 19, 2012 at 10:25 am
The believability of a story is certainly influenced by the listener/reader’s own culture, history, beliefs….but also by the talent of the storyteller. The plausibility of your stories is so real to me that I often have to remind myself that it is a story, and not an account out of a history book. Writing around historically known evidence and wrapping it in with insightful understanding of the context of culture and people of the time takes me so far into the moment that I miss the characters when the book is over. :) Keep up the amazing writing, love and aloha from the hawaiian islands!
Erika
May 19, 2012 at 11:26 am
I first found your book People of the River in my small library here in Stanwood Washington. Each time I finish one I go back and hope for another to be on the shelf. I ordered a few – but yesterday got People of the Nightland. Betrayal was a wonderful experience as well – I believe that is yours, although I do not see it in your list of books. I can easily imagine the spirit animals and peoples. The fact that you are what you both are makes these books even more amazing. I will forever be thankful to have found your North America’s Forgotten Past series. I live in a Native American world up here in NW Washington along the coast. We have the Tualip, Stilliguamish, Lumi, and many other tribes surrounding us. I love it here – I can, while reading your books imagine these people living in the forest around our two acres and running across my back field which once was forest. Thank you and I look forward to the next- but have many more in the series to read as well. As a closet writer – love reading. One day I will write what I know. Peace to you and yours.
May 19, 2012 at 9:03 pm
Wow. You are the 2nd writer u have read using the term writers hat, the 1sts being S. King. This is a great look forward to the upcoming ‘VINE LANDS’ book(s?) I look forward with anticipation (and little doubt) to enjoy immensely, as much as Raising Cain or my very first People book…I finished a series of random books spreading history around the upper British Isles and Nordic stories about the heroes there and wound up coming back to your (latest) series. After this i have to mentally ‘regroup’ for Dark Towers and then I will Charge back into the worlds you and Michael create…truth told as fiction (like the current GRIMM tv show, FUN!..lol) Never Gets Old; thank You for sharing your work and perspective in this blog. ~Namaste~ darren m in Las Vegas NV
May 20, 2012 at 8:51 am
First, goodbye to Peal Hand & the Orphan, thanks for the trip!
Very interesting request! So my POV as a reader shifts to that of the writer; as I remember I think the Shoshoni religion has their ‘Ying & Yang’ of the spirit world, where the elders still hold onto the traditions that talk for them through the ‘mugwa’, daily conscious mind and the unconscious mind, ‘nuvzieip’, a plane of cognition, their ‘psychic gear … their sun dance. Interesting is their zoomorphic representation of spirit, the attitude of the animal, is I think only represented by the bear. That the spirit of the bear is equal to man. But the elders do not speak much of the evolution of the animals, such that the bear spirit once came from its paleo form, maybe the short-faced bear … I’ve always wondered. So their third dimension can come on through the elders language and heavily colored by cultural values, so the Norseman explorer is allowed to see by the spirits of color and dialogue, the shadow animal spirit manifests as he understands he has crossed over! I think Ake Hultkrantz has a better say about animal spirits and human modes of action.
May 20, 2012 at 10:20 am
My POV as a writer for Dark Wine Land would be as you say to make a believable common denominator through dialogue that engages the reader. Recently one of my co-workers, a student of the late James Miller, gave a talk to some Indians and put the elder to sleep … now had he identified his audience as Ute he could have started his talk based on the legends of the ‘Bear Dance’, like the Shoshoni Sun Dance. The Ute color and language would’ve communicated his findings … well better anyway. So I ask myself what do the elders say about morphological transition from (Archtodus simus) short-faced bear and herbivore to the (Ursus spelaeus) cave bear and carnivore and to modern day bear and omnivore. Does the bears zoomorphic representation of its spirit world also change? What is different about there nuvzieip as a shadow form, the same? Do the elders hold that story in a subliminal super truth. Stay tuned to the walk of the norsemen in the adventures of Vinland by Kathleen Gear. Thanks for many years of entertainment and science ~ Stanial … I know it seems like the three bears story but the real one!
May 20, 2012 at 10:51 am
The stories of Nordic mythology from the elders is one of belief in the 9 worlds (niu Heimer) of the of the tree of life; but then comes a neo-nordic who discovers the “Tenth World”!
May 20, 2012 at 1:00 pm
Kathy, Sounds like a great read. How long till it will be published? Remember I said you both paint pictures with words. Keep us / me informed.
May 22, 2012 at 6:08 am
I love your books, specially the Longhouse series. When can we expect the 4th book?
May 22, 2012 at 6:09 am
October, Marie. It’s titled PEOPLE OF THE BLACK SUN.
May 22, 2012 at 6:10 am
Bill, we won’t have a pub date until the contract is signed with Macmillan Tor/Forge. Expect it sometime in late 2014?
May 22, 2012 at 6:13 am
Stan: Kathleen notes that your topic sounds like a PhD dissertation! Great comments!
May 22, 2012 at 6:15 am
We most definately agree. We just wish that Hultkranz had written in greater volumes than he did.
May 22, 2012 at 6:16 am
You’re most welcome! Thanks for the great comments.
May 22, 2012 at 6:42 am
Patricia: Thanks so much for the compliments. One of our goals in writing the books is to make archaeology and history come alive in a way that just can’t be done in non fiction. And yes, THE BETRAYAL was an attempt to “look from the outside in” at the creation of Roman church. Only a handful of scholars are even familiar with the source material we used. If you can see the Native world, we have succeeded. Oh, and don’t put off your writing!
May 22, 2012 at 6:45 am
Erika: Mahalo! If you think you miss the characters after reading, imagine the sense of loss after living so intimately with them for months as they tell you how to write the book! Sometimes it leaves us as depressed as the death of a family member or beloved friend!
May 26, 2012 at 7:57 am
That long, lol. I may be dead by then. Can I read it in the spirit world? “Old” Bill
June 10, 2012 at 4:00 pm
I was introduced to your work by chance. I just happened to look at your cover for Book 1 of the contact series and thought it would be an interesting read. I found the book totally mesmerizing and couldn’t put in down. Needless to say I couldn’t wait for book 2 and I just finished book 3. I found all three books just wonderful particularly since my father’s side of the family has cherokee heritage. My father’s grandmother was a cherokee princess so I am told. Your books paint such a vivid picture of the culture and the surroundings. I find myself being transported back to the time and places depicted within the covers of your books.
I understand the reality of events and stories don’t always end up the way you want. However the ending in book three was somewhat bitter sweet for me eventhough I figured it would turn out pretty much as it did. I am a Christian, but I truly admire the sense of spirituality displayed by the Native American cultures. In fact at times these cultures exhibit a spirtituality far greater than many of those that profess Christianity.
Keep of the good work
Thomas Rone
Huntington, West Virginia
Home of the “Thundering Herd of Marshall U.
We Are……Marshall.
June 13, 2012 at 12:34 pm
Thomas: Thanks for the kind words. We dearly enjoyed writing the CONTACT books. We’d hoped to write a fourth, but the publisher told us to leave it at a trilogy. And, as to de Soto, it’s amazing what people of “faith” can convince themselves of, isn’t it? Thanks again, and be well!
June 27, 2012 at 4:47 pm
I hope you guys are safe from the horrible fires in the West. I have been thinking about you folks.
Thomas Rone
Marshall University
“The Thundering Herd”